How's My Driving?

As it says in the title. Got crit? Concrit much preferred, as I can't do much with 'you suck' alone. So instead I'd appreciate a 'You suck and this is why' or, better yet, 'You suck and this is why and here's how you could fix it'.

Any and all feedback on my interpretation of Jim goes here.
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